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Underneath
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01-12-2014, 12:31 PM
One of the best poems I have read so far today, it had a magnificent flow and I agree with Jester that it didn't feel overbearing or tacky. A few lines were slightly off pace but it was nothing that brought the poem down at all. Truly an honour to read, thank you for sharing
"Do not go where the path may lead, go instead where there is no path and leave a trail." - Ralph Waldo Emerson
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Underneath - by LaughGiraffe - 07-15-2013, 09:27 AM
RE: Underneath - by mwhite0017 - 08-29-2013, 11:45 AM
RE: Underneath - by cidermaid - 08-30-2013, 02:22 AM
RE: Underneath - by The Jester - 01-09-2014, 07:59 PM
RE: Underneath - by teejai - 01-12-2014, 12:31 PM
RE: Underneath - by tomoffing - 01-12-2014, 07:41 PM
RE: Underneath - by Blake - 01-14-2014, 02:09 AM
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