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Escape (a sonnet)
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01-12-2014, 12:24 PM
I was able to understand the message being conveyed however I felt when I was reading it, I stumbled several times near the beginning and the last part when you are looking for peace in the eyes of (I'm assuming) your lover, I really liked that part. Perhaps I'm a hopeless romantic, either way, thank you for sharing
"Do not go where the path may lead, go instead where there is no path and leave a trail." - Ralph Waldo Emerson
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Escape (a sonnet) - by ThePinsir - 01-11-2014, 06:18 AM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by rowens - 01-11-2014, 07:11 AM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by billy - 01-11-2014, 10:39 AM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by Destructed - 01-11-2014, 02:37 PM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by teejai - 01-12-2014, 12:24 PM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by tomoffing - 01-13-2014, 05:39 AM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by ThePinsir - 01-17-2014, 01:17 AM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by cheyrn - 01-17-2014, 10:50 PM
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