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Escape (a sonnet)
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01-11-2014, 02:37 PM
I like the arrangement of this, but the tone changes very suddenly and that could either be a good or bad thing, depending on the reader. But really other than that I think the vocabulary you put into this in a descriptive aspect is wonderful. Wish I could find something to criticize but I simply can't.
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Escape (a sonnet) - by ThePinsir - 01-11-2014, 06:18 AM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by rowens - 01-11-2014, 07:11 AM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by billy - 01-11-2014, 10:39 AM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by Destructed - 01-11-2014, 02:37 PM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by teejai - 01-12-2014, 12:24 PM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by tomoffing - 01-13-2014, 05:39 AM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by ThePinsir - 01-17-2014, 01:17 AM
RE: Escape (a sonnet) - by cheyrn - 01-17-2014, 10:50 PM
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