Separation trauma
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(01-06-2014, 10:17 AM)cheyrn Wrote:  It's sad on several levels.

In my extra humble opinion, the word "the" should be removed from the last line.
Thanks Cheyrn I will have a think about your suggestion. Keith

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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Messages In This Thread
Separation trauma - by Keith - 11-27-2013, 08:46 AM
RE: Separation trauma - by ChristopherSea - 11-27-2013, 09:18 AM
RE: Separation trauma - by Keith - 12-04-2013, 07:07 AM
RE: Separation trauma - by cheyrn - 01-06-2014, 10:17 AM
RE: Separation trauma - by Keith - 01-11-2014, 09:38 AM
RE: Separation trauma - by billy - 01-11-2014, 09:57 AM
RE: Separation trauma - by Keith - 01-11-2014, 10:04 AM



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