01-08-2014, 12:41 PM
(01-08-2014, 12:39 PM)milo Wrote:Oh, Okay.(01-08-2014, 12:36 PM)trueenigma Wrote:well, there is no set meter for the poem so i figured best bet would be to call out lines that don't work in verse at all.(01-08-2014, 12:31 PM)milo Wrote: that line is fine - all trochaic with one iambOf course it's all trochaic with one iamb. how do I know that it's fine? I have know idea if that is what the author intended. what exactly are we doing here?
the poem seems to fluctuate between iambic and trochaic and since you can read/write a poem switching between the two I decided to use that as the benchmark.

