01-08-2014, 12:39 PM
(01-08-2014, 12:36 PM)trueenigma Wrote:well, there is no set meter for the poem so i figured best bet would be to call out lines that don't work in verse at all.(01-08-2014, 12:31 PM)milo Wrote:Of course it's all trochaic with one iamb. how do I know that it's fine? I have know idea if that is what the author intended. what exactly are we doing here?(01-08-2014, 12:21 PM)trueenigma Wrote: FLINgthe STOCKSthe SHOTSthe MUZZles, SCATter PHARMa CIESlike JESus, getDRUNK,that line is fine - all trochaic with one iamb
the poem seems to fluctuate between iambic and trochaic and since you can read/write a poem switching between the two I decided to use that as the benchmark.

