Reverend Enters Sin City!
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I will forego the "meaning" and speak to the writing. I might make some revisions...input only, bin at will.
Clothed in sin
I am off to the city. ( how sinful are these clothes?)

Bad is how I am,
and my bad
just don't sit pretty.

I'm Reverend Debauched
and my leanings
lead toward,

The expression of
all that is untoward:
which in Sin City,
is just the beginning
of my eternal reward.

There are some punctuation issues. Where is sin city?
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