01-03-2014, 08:00 PM
this poem is short and perfect. one may say that regret isn't something that would "darken a laugh" or make some evil in that case but its all how you portray regret.
Regret is a tricky emotion and it can make very remorseful and apologetic or very cold and hard.
and "blacks" should be "blackens". The correct spelling doesn't taint the flow or meter of this poem
Regret is a tricky emotion and it can make very remorseful and apologetic or very cold and hard.
and "blacks" should be "blackens". The correct spelling doesn't taint the flow or meter of this poem