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Residuals
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01-03-2014, 04:10 AM
(01-02-2014, 05:55 AM)bena Wrote: Not a big fan of "regret blacks my fingers"--since it should be blackens, and that might mess up your otherwise perfect meter. Perhaps "Stains?"==not sure, but the rest is perfect.True, but I want to sort of make it clear it's a reference to the "ash" above it, and keep the darker tone throughout. |
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RE: Residuals - by tigrflye - 12-22-2013, 04:27 AM
RE: Residuals - by Wjames - 12-27-2013, 02:36 PM
RE: Residuals - by Farkas - 12-29-2013, 01:25 AM
RE: Residuals - by bena - 01-02-2014, 05:55 AM
RE: Residuals - by Wjames - 01-03-2014, 04:10 AM
RE: Residuals - by AcasiaMotley - 01-03-2014, 08:00 PM
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