Residuals
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(12-22-2013, 03:54 AM)Wjames Wrote:  Night was a flame
now morning’s an ash, - perfect
regret blacks my fingers
and darkens my laugh.
Not 100% sure you would have a wicked bad guy laugh if you had any regret. Maybe that is just me being picky, but perhaps something else could black your fingers and still give away your guilt.. . Oh, maybe guilt?
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Residuals - by Wjames - 12-22-2013, 03:54 AM
RE: Residuals - by tigrflye - 12-22-2013, 04:27 AM
RE: Residuals - by Wjames - 12-27-2013, 02:36 PM
RE: Residuals - by Farkas - 12-29-2013, 01:25 AM
RE: Residuals - by bena - 01-02-2014, 05:55 AM
RE: Residuals - by Wjames - 01-03-2014, 04:10 AM
RE: Residuals - by AcasiaMotley - 01-03-2014, 08:00 PM



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