12-20-2013, 03:25 AM
Hi, welcome.
I think this could be much improved if you could go deeper and provide some images:
If you could put those four qualities into an image, it would be a whopper.
Use 2 or 3 or 4 if you have to, but give me something to remember.
I think this could be much improved if you could go deeper and provide some images:
Quote:Such strength. Such violence. Such beauty. Such enmity.
If you could put those four qualities into an image, it would be a whopper.
Use 2 or 3 or 4 if you have to, but give me something to remember. (12-20-2013, 03:02 AM)Clandestine Wrote: For all wither in the storms brought by living.
Oh, the pain!
Yet, it's more a hurricane.
Oh, the intensity!
Such strength. Such violence. Such beauty. Such enmity.
Oh my!
But wait, my brothers.
For I have found the eye.
Oh, the gentleness!
Pressures perfect where life is limitless.
Oh, the clarity!
Time too short, days too few.
This love a rarity.
Oh, the pain.
billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips