Poem #2
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I think the simplicity of the last stanza is nice. And if you take time to think about the poem as a whole, the two stanza version, it's interesting. Sometimes I think the last lines are too simple, sometimes I don't.

The stanza in the middle doesn't add much.

Are the poems numbered because they are part of a series to be read together?
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Poem #2 - by oxomiya - 12-17-2013, 11:08 PM
RE: Poem #2 - by bena - 12-17-2013, 11:13 PM
RE: Poem #2 - by oxomiya - 12-17-2013, 11:25 PM
RE: Poem #2 - by rowens - 12-18-2013, 04:42 AM
RE: Poem #2 - by oxomiya - 12-18-2013, 05:01 AM
RE: Poem #2 - by rowens - 12-18-2013, 05:09 AM
RE: Poem #2 - by oxomiya - 12-18-2013, 05:33 AM
RE: Poem #2 - by rowens - 12-18-2013, 05:38 AM
RE: Poem #2 - by bena - 12-18-2013, 05:52 AM
RE: Poem #2 - by oxomiya - 12-18-2013, 05:58 AM



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