Poem #2

[oxomiya]

Thanks Mel (bena) for your comment. Very much appreciated.

I like to think that it is the other way around - only *you* the reader knows what these lines mean/say. I am not sure this is the right way to go... but just want to explore the idea.


Sam

It's very interesting. I'm not really sure what you're trying to say, and I would wager you are the only one who knows. Perhaps a title would help....my titles generally sum up the whole poem...so readers know before they began what they might encounter.

just a thought.

mel.