12-17-2013, 10:56 PM
Discussing the finer points of tetrameter, when a poem is in that---I don't think that takes the thread off-topic, Master Billy. I think this is great, and like true said, if you read child like 2 syllables, it works.
You do need the title to know what it's about because it could be read as abortion, or dumpster baby--not someone just abandoned their child to the wilderness.
I liked.
mel.
You do need the title to know what it's about because it could be read as abortion, or dumpster baby--not someone just abandoned their child to the wilderness.
I liked.
mel.
