Feral Child (a triolet)
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Discussing the finer points of tetrameter, when a poem is in that---I don't think that takes the thread off-topic, Master Billy. I think this is great, and like true said, if you read child like 2 syllables, it works.

You do need the title to know what it's about because it could be read as abortion, or dumpster baby--not someone just abandoned their child to the wilderness.

I liked.

mel.
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Feral Child (a triolet) - by HalfOpenArms - 12-16-2013, 12:45 PM
RE: Feral Child (a triolet) - by billy - 12-16-2013, 04:01 PM
RE: Feral Child (a triolet) - by trueenigma - 12-16-2013, 04:18 PM
RE: Feral Child (a triolet) - by billy - 12-16-2013, 07:08 PM
RE: Feral Child (a triolet) - by cidermaid - 12-16-2013, 05:43 PM
RE: Feral Child (a triolet) - by bena - 12-17-2013, 10:56 PM



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