A Terza Rima Sonnet Attempt
#3
I kinda got that it may be about the pope, but that's because I'm so damned.

My only comment since milo has been here and pointed out all the other stuff is that L3 plagues me...I can't work the rhythm out in my mind no matter how many trochee iambs i work in there here or there. Maybe it's just me.
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A Terza Rima Sonnet Attempt - by alatos - 12-17-2013, 05:38 AM
RE: A Terza Rima Sonnet Attempt - by milo - 12-17-2013, 06:00 AM
RE: A Terza Rima Sonnet Attempt - by alatos - 12-17-2013, 06:29 AM
RE: A Terza Rima Sonnet Attempt - by bena - 12-17-2013, 06:21 AM



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