Alleyway, revision 1
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I make the inference that this woman is in an alleyway.

The word "meaning" in its function is odd to me. It stands out because it is the abstract, authorial word, that attitudinizes.

The anthropos in the blanket, "strands huddling together, hanging on to meaning" is juxtaposed with the woman. She is more or less human beside the activity and focus we have for the blanket. It reveals something.

The divided focus, woman as two things, or woman in blanket is problematic. It makes me feel uncomfortable.

I'm hung up on an internal response: A blankets thread does not hang on to the meaning of life. A woman does (but instinct by way of "means" may suffice).
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Alleyway, revision 1 - by justcloudy - 12-16-2013, 10:43 PM
RE: Alleyway - by Nihil Loc - 12-17-2013, 06:02 AM
RE: Alleyway - by lucentwavering - 12-17-2013, 06:17 AM
RE: Alleyway, revision 1 - by justcloudy - 12-17-2013, 07:45 AM
RE: Alleyway, revision 1 - by milo - 12-17-2013, 07:47 AM
RE: Alleyway, revision 1 - by justcloudy - 12-17-2013, 07:56 AM
RE: Alleyway, revision 1 - by Nihil Loc - 12-21-2013, 09:41 AM



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