Coming round to...

[Truerenigma]

Hi True
Thanks for the thoughts and feedback. I was going for a disjointed and abstract voice of someone experiencing the confusion of the transition from full anaesthesia to consciousness. (but obviously overdid this from your notes). I had wondered about putting it into a Pantoum to give it the drifting back and forth feeling but decided this was not fuzzy enough. Will think some more on what to do with it.
Thanks for your time AJ.

Hmm.. Yeah, I missed that, but i really like the idea. I also like the Pantoum idea. Good luck with it.