The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - 2nd Revision

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The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - 2nd Revision

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12-14-2013, 06:13 PM

If you ask me this is perfect now. Well-measured. Lovely.

Well done. =]

-justcloudy

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The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - 2nd Revision - by beaufort - 12-07-2013, 07:58 AM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - by No1wouldriotforless - 12-07-2013, 08:26 AM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - by 71degrees - 12-07-2013, 08:40 AM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - by jdvanwijk - 12-09-2013, 02:09 AM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - by beaufort - 12-09-2013, 02:39 AM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - by jdvanwijk - 12-09-2013, 02:54 AM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - by HalfOpenArms - 12-09-2013, 11:30 AM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - by Rochelle Potkar - 12-09-2013, 09:08 PM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - Revision - by Simatong - 12-11-2013, 06:46 AM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - Revision - by justcloudy - 12-11-2013, 07:01 PM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - Revision - by beaufort - 12-11-2013, 08:56 PM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - Revision - by 71degrees - 12-12-2013, 12:02 AM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - Revision - by justcloudy - 12-11-2013, 09:17 PM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - 2nd Revision - by beaufort - 12-13-2013, 08:15 PM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - 2nd Revision - by ellajam - 12-14-2013, 05:48 PM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - 2nd Revision - by justcloudy - 12-14-2013, 06:13 PM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - 2nd Revision - by beaufort - 12-14-2013, 08:20 PM

RE: The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - 2nd Revision - by jdvanwijk - 12-16-2013, 12:35 AM

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