12-13-2013, 09:04 PM
AJ it seems we're on the same wavelength, because "heavy with reminiscence" was my first idea actually, but I just couldn't make it work. I'll give it more thought.
I like what you said about "enclose" but I have mixed feelings about changing it. It is his home, he should feel sheltered, even if sorrow is present as well. On the other hand, he's trapped inside the world while she has left... Hmm hmm hmm.
Thanks so much for your thoughts. =]
-justcloudy
I like what you said about "enclose" but I have mixed feelings about changing it. It is his home, he should feel sheltered, even if sorrow is present as well. On the other hand, he's trapped inside the world while she has left... Hmm hmm hmm.
Thanks so much for your thoughts. =]
-justcloudy
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