12-13-2013, 02:24 AM
It looks like a sonnet, smells like a sonnet, tastes like a sonnet...but each line only has 4 feet. I wonder why...
My only real issue is line 11; the meter is kind of off. To me it reads like:
its CREST CUT WITH a NARrow RIFT
My only real issue is line 11; the meter is kind of off. To me it reads like:
its CREST CUT WITH a NARrow RIFT
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!