The Rabbit Trail

The Rabbit Trail

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12-13-2013, 12:23 AM

Thanks for the feedback everyone! I was thinking about doing an alternate, serious ending. And as for the tense shifts mentioned aboved... cars ARE aglow, field (IS) a vast white sheet, paw prints ARE faintly dimpled... it sounds OK to me...

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The Rabbit Trail - by alatos - 12-11-2013, 08:11 AM

RE: The Rabbit Trail - by Keith - 12-11-2013, 08:35 AM

RE: The Rabbit Trail - by ellajam - 12-11-2013, 10:33 PM

RE: The Rabbit Trail - by Nihil Loc - 12-12-2013, 12:09 PM

RE: The Rabbit Trail - by dialectical - 12-12-2013, 03:21 PM

RE: The Rabbit Trail - by alatos - 12-13-2013, 12:23 AM

RE: The Rabbit Trail - by ThePinsir - 12-13-2013, 02:24 AM

RE: The Rabbit Trail - by hyasmc - 12-13-2013, 07:24 AM

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