12-12-2013, 09:42 AM
(12-11-2013, 07:44 AM)justcloudy Wrote: AJ thanks so much. I'm so happy I was able to pull you back in, I completely know that feeling and am pretty touched a poem of mine could do that for someone. =] I see where you're going with the title suggestions... I'll see if I can find something that may work. Otherwise I might leave it as is, dunno.Justcloudy
Keith, don't mind in the least, thanks for the suggestions! I'll see what I can do. But I don't see the link with the title and the first line...?
-justcloudy
Quick edit posted. I think it's a bit less... fumbling... now. Maybe. ;p
His grumbles snag on the plastic branches, IMO could be any plastic branches but not on Dec 23rd, this date tells the reader its a Christmas tree so we are straight into the focus of the poem. Best Keith
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