Rube Barb
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(12-11-2013, 11:29 AM)crow Wrote:  Can I post this here as my one poem of the day? It's the second half of Rube Barb, called Clown Crown. The whole piece is dedicated to Patch Adams, and I plan to hand-write it and mail it to him after I incorporate y'all's feedback.
Here is my thought on tis and I am speaking as a poster not a moderator:

Why post another poem when you haven't really worked through this one yet? It's not a race. We are going to be here for a long long time and I can't imagine anyone wanting to get involved in the in-depth work-shopping that serious requires on 2 poems at the same time.

That being the case, i don't think it's against the rules, just I seem to see better results when posters really tear into one poem at a time.

Also, I hope you are providing other posters an equivalent amount of attention as you are receiving, don't forget, everyone wants a little attention and the site works on reciprocity.
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Messages In This Thread
Rube Barb - by crow - 12-10-2013, 12:51 PM
RE: Rube Barb - by milo - 12-11-2013, 08:52 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by crow - 12-11-2013, 11:00 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:08 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by trueenigma - 12-11-2013, 11:16 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:20 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by trueenigma - 12-11-2013, 11:31 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:32 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by trueenigma - 12-11-2013, 11:34 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by crow - 12-11-2013, 11:21 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:23 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by crow - 12-11-2013, 11:24 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:26 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by crow - 12-11-2013, 11:29 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:41 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by crow - 12-11-2013, 11:48 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:51 AM



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