Rube Barb
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(12-11-2013, 11:31 AM)trueenigma Wrote:  
(12-11-2013, 11:20 AM)milo Wrote:  
(12-11-2013, 11:16 AM)trueenigma Wrote:  Rapture is a grace-filled-hand
Pie-in-the-face. Right? Man, fuck
This fucking place. We're meant to suck
On cream that causes us pain and
Then apologize? We're clowns, so we understand
A lot about hard luck prat falls yuck yuck
Ten bucks for us to fuck up
And shrug to the schmucks in the grand stand

Honestly, you're starting to remind me of Gerard Manley Hopkins
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pratFALLS is pronounced PRATfalls and understand is UNderSTAND, no reason to demote.
I didn't feel like typing, clicking seem a good idea at the time. type repy and try scanning with all of that code.

as far as we and un I think i had it on un the first time then got a big weee not in scansion really but /we/ as in, hey man, /we/ understand, bud, /they/ might not, but /we/ do.
I would have done that too if UNderSTAND didn't follow, but there is no way that would demote so we had to.
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Messages In This Thread
Rube Barb - by crow - 12-10-2013, 12:51 PM
RE: Rube Barb - by milo - 12-11-2013, 08:52 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by crow - 12-11-2013, 11:00 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:08 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by trueenigma - 12-11-2013, 11:16 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:20 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by trueenigma - 12-11-2013, 11:31 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:32 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by trueenigma - 12-11-2013, 11:34 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by crow - 12-11-2013, 11:21 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:23 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by crow - 12-11-2013, 11:24 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:26 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by crow - 12-11-2013, 11:29 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:41 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by crow - 12-11-2013, 11:48 AM
RE: Rube Barb - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:51 AM



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