December 23rd-- revision 2
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Thanks both for the kind words.

Speaktaboo glad you could empathize with him. Lol about 11, but when we routinely notice something we end up seeing it everywhere. ;D

Halfopen yes you got the story right! And yes I wanted "sigh" to be alone, I think the sentiment deserves a pause, and to be separated from the rest. What don't you like about reminiscent?

-justcloudy
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December 23rd-- revision 2 - by justcloudy - 12-10-2013, 09:19 AM
RE: December 23rd - by HalfOpenArms - 12-10-2013, 01:20 PM
RE: December 23rd - by Speaktaboo - 12-10-2013, 02:41 PM
RE: December 23rd - by justcloudy - 12-10-2013, 07:24 PM
RE: December 23rd - by cidermaid - 12-10-2013, 11:26 PM
RE: December 23rd - by Keith - 12-11-2013, 07:28 AM
RE: December 23rd - by justcloudy - 12-11-2013, 07:44 AM
RE: December 23rd-- revision 1 - by Keith - 12-12-2013, 09:42 AM
RE: December 23rd-- revision 1 - by heslopian - 12-12-2013, 10:14 AM
RE: December 23rd-- revision 1 - by justcloudy - 12-12-2013, 10:29 PM
RE: December 23rd-- revision 1 - by beaufort - 12-13-2013, 05:26 AM
RE: December 23rd-- revision 1 - by 71degrees - 12-13-2013, 06:44 AM
RE: December 23rd-- revision 1 - by justcloudy - 12-13-2013, 08:20 AM
RE: December 23rd-- revision 2 - by cidermaid - 12-13-2013, 06:13 PM
RE: December 23rd-- revision 2 - by justcloudy - 12-13-2013, 09:04 PM
RE: December 23rd-- revision 2 - by bena - 12-15-2013, 07:49 AM
RE: December 23rd-- revision 2 - by beaufort - 12-15-2013, 07:57 AM
RE: December 23rd-- revision 2 - by justcloudy - 12-16-2013, 04:30 AM



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