December 23rd-- revision 2

December 23rd-- revision 2

Speaktaboo Offline

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12-10-2013, 02:41 PM

This was beautifully written. I felt what he felt. There was only a few lines about his life and I feel like I know him. The imagery in the first two stanzas! Perfect! I felt bad for him and his 3 ft tree. This piece was full bodied and felt nice to read. A subtle and semi sad take on the holiday prep. Thank you for posting.

Funny that the first piece I'm reading of yours has the word eleven in the first stanza. Happens to me a few times a week.

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December 23rd-- revision 2 - by justcloudy - 12-10-2013, 09:19 AM

RE: December 23rd - by HalfOpenArms - 12-10-2013, 01:20 PM

RE: December 23rd - by Speaktaboo - 12-10-2013, 02:41 PM

RE: December 23rd - by justcloudy - 12-10-2013, 07:24 PM

RE: December 23rd - by cidermaid - 12-10-2013, 11:26 PM

RE: December 23rd - by Keith - 12-11-2013, 07:28 AM

RE: December 23rd - by justcloudy - 12-11-2013, 07:44 AM

RE: December 23rd-- revision 1 - by Keith - 12-12-2013, 09:42 AM

RE: December 23rd-- revision 1 - by heslopian - 12-12-2013, 10:14 AM

RE: December 23rd-- revision 1 - by justcloudy - 12-12-2013, 10:29 PM