The Family in the Waiting Room Wants More - 2nd Revision

[jdvanwijk]

Hello beaufort,

I think you should give it some more time and thought before changing; there's no need to rush! Especially when a poem is already really good, it can take a lot of time to find words that are on the same level as the rest. The edits you've made don't work for me yet...

All best,
Jan