A New Psalm

A New Psalm

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12-07-2013, 11:34 AM

I'm going to have to agree with Chris, the line breaks do seem awkward and do nothing for the flow of the poem. I do like its expansive nature, but I wish I was given some sort of subject focal point, maybe I'm not reading close enough though.
Hank.

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A New Psalm - by 71degrees - 12-01-2013, 09:24 AM

RE: A New Psalm - by ChristopherSea - 12-02-2013, 02:44 AM

RE: A New Psalm - by 71degrees - 12-08-2013, 01:28 AM

RE: A New Psalm - by hankabadpoet - 12-07-2013, 11:34 AM

RE: A New Psalm - by PoetryAndPhysics - 12-08-2013, 07:04 AM

RE: A New Psalm - by trailertrash - 12-09-2013, 08:00 AM

RE: A New Psalm - by 71degrees - 12-09-2013, 11:32 PM

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