12-06-2013, 11:09 AM
(12-06-2013, 09:09 AM)gilmored Wrote: thanks heslopian for your thoughts, but you don't have the revised version on your quote. I will consider your advice on the parts that are still in it, and welcome any more advice you may have.Here's the link for the site's suggestion on how to post an edit.
I have to say that hair sprouting everywhere made me laugh, I pictured her with a mustache and earhair. Sorry
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