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12-06-2013, 08:57 AM
Your suggestions make sense, especially with/about the last two lines. Looking back at the comments others have made, some folks seem to want things out of this poem that they want to see while ignoring 3/4 of the poem. You got it. And I thank you for this comment. It gives me confidence to keep the full intention and work on the other things you have suggested. Appreciate it.
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RE: What Remains - by 71degrees - 12-01-2013, 09:04 AM
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RE: What Remains - by trueenigma - 12-01-2013, 12:17 PM
RE: What Remains - by 71degrees - 12-02-2013, 01:03 PM
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RE: What Remains - by jdvanwijk - 12-05-2013, 05:00 AM
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RE: What Remains - by 71degrees - 12-06-2013, 08:57 AM
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