12-06-2013, 07:22 AM
this is a strong poem. It tells the story of oh so many, yet is all its own. I love the chevy reference! personally you lost me in the last three lines. I'm not sure what to suggest. It just seams unfinished
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Whiskey Memories third edit - by beaufort - 12-04-2013, 11:58 AM
RE: Whiskey Memories - by tectak - 12-04-2013, 05:14 PM
RE: Whiskey Memories - by beaufort - 12-04-2013, 08:21 PM
RE: Whiskey Memories - by ChristopherSea - 12-04-2013, 08:51 PM
RE: Whiskey Memories - by beaufort - 12-04-2013, 09:40 PM
RE: Whiskey Memories - by Todd - 12-04-2013, 09:43 PM
RE: Whiskey Memories - by beaufort - 12-04-2013, 10:16 PM
RE: Whiskey Memories - by gilmored - 12-06-2013, 07:22 AM
RE: Whiskey Memories - by milo - 12-06-2013, 08:32 AM
RE: Whiskey Memories - by gilmored - 12-06-2013, 10:23 AM
RE: Whiskey Memories - by Todd - 12-06-2013, 08:49 AM
RE: Whiskey Memories - by beaufort - 12-06-2013, 11:23 AM
RE: Whiskey Memories - by milo - 12-06-2013, 11:25 AM
RE: Whiskey Memories - by beaufort - 12-06-2013, 11:33 AM
RE: Whiskey Memories second edit - by Todd - 12-07-2013, 12:57 AM
RE: Whiskey Memories second edit - by beaufort - 12-07-2013, 01:09 AM
RE: Whiskey Memories second edit - by Asyndetoff - 01-24-2014, 02:09 PM
RE: Whiskey Memories second edit - by billy - 01-24-2014, 04:12 PM
RE: Whiskey Memories second edit - by justcloudy - 01-25-2014, 08:52 AM
RE: Whiskey Memories third edit - by beaufort - 01-26-2014, 06:08 AM
RE: Whiskey Memories third edit - by gslegrá - 01-31-2014, 11:05 PM
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