my girls
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Thank you for the comment. You have given me some things to think about. I look forward to your comments on my other work. As for the second stanza it isn't the sound I'm referring to, but the explosive force. The following line describes how i love even the smallest things about them.


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my girls - by gilmored - 12-06-2013, 12:12 AM
RE: my girls - by ellajam - 12-06-2013, 01:34 AM
RE: my girls - by gilmored - 12-06-2013, 06:45 AM
RE: my girls - by heslopian - 12-06-2013, 06:58 AM
RE: my girls - by gilmored - 12-06-2013, 09:09 AM
RE: my girls - by ellajam - 12-06-2013, 11:09 AM
RE: my girls - by jdvanwijk - 12-09-2013, 01:45 AM



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