12-03-2013, 11:27 AM
Good things guys, I may try something with quatrains and tercets.
I realize not a critique forum, and I realize I took some liberties for content. Does this possibly work:
The blood upon the ground will speak
of deed and Mark and thus critique
the ember that ignites in pique,
by redcap’s teeth,
by vampire’s thirst, and banshee’s shriek:
a knife unsheathed.
I realize not a critique forum, and I realize I took some liberties for content. Does this possibly work:
The blood upon the ground will speak
of deed and Mark and thus critique
the ember that ignites in pique,
by redcap’s teeth,
by vampire’s thirst, and banshee’s shriek:
a knife unsheathed.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson