12-03-2013, 08:49 AM
I really like this Chazz. I agree with Chris on the title, but I'm not sure if I agree with his point about finding famous figures for S2... but I'm not really into obscure references. I think Sally and Billy as generics are fine. Sally is such a goody-two-shoes name which fits, so maybe as a contrast you could change "Billy" to something a bit more... imposing? Badass? You get my drift. ;p
Anyway it's short but it does the trick. Nicely done.
Anyway it's short but it does the trick. Nicely done.
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.