Ambiguity Defined
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(12-03-2013, 12:24 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote:  
(12-02-2013, 10:07 PM)Charlesjoseph Wrote:  Insanity Defined

Steven lost God in a black hole,
Amit found him with Quantum Physics.

Sally lost God when the baby died,
Billy found him after the needle.

I've lost God many times,
but never found his equal.



Not sure if i'm happy with the form any suggestions?

Chazz, I like it, but you may have to further identify those folks to grasp the lines and feel the full effect. I am assuming Stephen Hawking for the blackhole, but you spelled the first name differently, and Amit Goswami for Quantum Physics. However, Sally and Billy are guesses or generic and have less weight. I would use full names for them for impact (e.g., Lenny Bruce or John Belushi fit the needle). Not sure about the miscarrige, but it's easy enough to find a famous one. As for the title, it is not so insane to me. It is more like 'Ambiguity Defined'. Cheers/Chris
Hey Chris,
You got it. Stephen was a typo. I began putting their full names and then retracted but i like your suggestion. Makes sense. The title was not set in stone. So, i think i'll also steal your title idea. 'Ambiguity Defined' Thanks for the help Sir,
Chazz
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Messages In This Thread
Ambiguity Defined - by Charlesjoseph - 12-02-2013, 10:07 PM
RE: Insanity defined - by ChristopherSea - 12-03-2013, 12:24 AM
RE: Insanity defined - by Charlesjoseph - 12-03-2013, 01:30 AM
RE: Insanity defined - by justcloudy - 12-03-2013, 08:49 AM
RE: Insanity defined - by Charlesjoseph - 12-03-2013, 09:49 AM
RE: Ambiguity Defined - by Charlesjoseph - 12-03-2013, 10:36 PM



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