12-03-2013, 12:24 AM
(12-02-2013, 10:07 PM)Charlesjoseph Wrote: Insanity Defined
Steven lost God in a black hole,
Amit found him with Quantum Physics.
Sally lost God when the baby died,
Billy found him after the needle.
I've lost God many times,
but never found his equal.
Not sure if i'm happy with the form any suggestions?
Chazz, I like it, but you may have to further identify those folks to grasp the lines and feel the full effect. I am assuming Stephen Hawking for the blackhole, but you spelled the first name differently, and Amit Goswami for Quantum Physics. However, Sally and Billy are guesses or generic and have less weight. I would use full names for them for impact (e.g., Lenny Bruce or John Belushi fit the needle). Not sure about the miscarrige, but it's easy enough to find a famous one. As for the title, it is not so insane to me. It is more like 'Ambiguity Defined'. Cheers/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

