12-02-2013, 03:26 AM
Going through the whole poem, I simply thought the best way to go would be to break up this poem and elaborate on the strongest sections. As it is, it feels too general about everything because it skims over so fast.
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Happy Holidays - by LanceRocks - 12-02-2013, 12:02 AM
RE: Happy Holidays - by rowens - 12-02-2013, 03:02 AM
RE: Happy Holidays - by LanceRocks - 12-02-2013, 03:21 AM
RE: Happy Holidays - by rowens - 12-02-2013, 03:26 AM
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