Our Last Time (edit)

[Glittercake]

Thanks for your help. I see how my rhymes are boxed in, but I edited the lines so every single one of them has purpose other than to rhyme like Rowens pointed out. I'll try to cut it down and format a strict rhythm for the flow of the poem when I edit it next. Thank you and I like that line too, I think I'm going to switch the first two stanzas and edit them.

Thanks again.