Fighting life, edit 2

[justcloudy]

Yea it was just a quick edit tom, hopefully I'll have more time to iron it out tonight.

Interesting idea about L3, S2... thanks for pointing out that it's not having the full effect it could, not sure I would've seen that on my own but now it's so obvious.

Thanks for your time!!

-justcloudy

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Btw in S1 L3 "filled" is supposed to be past tense, not the passive. Does it work?