11-28-2013, 08:04 AM
Thanks 
and my friend said it sounded more like a song than a poem, because I write both, so I understand why it's so catchy.
The poem is not about cheating at all... It's about that one person we all run back to even though we broke up or stopped seeing each other. This poem is essentially about this girl that I get drunk or high with and we end up making love even though we aren't together anymore. Every time it happens we see it as a mistake and say it's the last time...
This is my favorite poem I've ever written because of how real it is and I want to try adding another stanza, thanks for the suggestion.
and my friend said it sounded more like a song than a poem, because I write both, so I understand why it's so catchy. The poem is not about cheating at all... It's about that one person we all run back to even though we broke up or stopped seeing each other. This poem is essentially about this girl that I get drunk or high with and we end up making love even though we aren't together anymore. Every time it happens we see it as a mistake and say it's the last time...
This is my favorite poem I've ever written because of how real it is and I want to try adding another stanza, thanks for the suggestion.