11-28-2013, 03:07 AM
(11-27-2013, 07:20 AM)killthepoet Wrote: You wear the greatest of DisguisesLots of questioning here. Is the intent to lead the reader to a conclusion or to question themselves?
To the congregation
You appear the lamb
Laying upon the stone alter
A symbol of sacrifice.
But you are the priest
With a cold blade
In your hand
"For with this you shall be healed" you say
Why must I repent?
How hath I sinned?
Let the blood drip at your feet
Remove your robes
And allow them to see
The heartless reaper
Underneath
Seems to oscillate between a personal opinion on the matter and then leaving it open for the reader. Perhaps it might be better served doing one or the other?
Is it the disguise to be exposed or the intent of the priest? Or someone intending to the be priest?

