11-26-2013, 07:41 AM
Thanks so much for the compliments and suggestions. 
The line in question "Why do I have these feelings though?" Was originally "What do I have these feelings for?" I eventually decided on the first cause I thought it sounded better, but what do you think?

The line in question "Why do I have these feelings though?" Was originally "What do I have these feelings for?" I eventually decided on the first cause I thought it sounded better, but what do you think?

