Our Last Time
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Thanks so much for the compliments and suggestions. Smile

The line in question "Why do I have these feelings though?" Was originally "What do I have these feelings for?" I eventually decided on the first cause I thought it sounded better, but what do you think?
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Our Last Time - by Glittercake - 11-24-2013, 02:23 PM
RE: Our Last Time - by Mungo man - 11-26-2013, 02:38 AM
RE: Our Last Time - by Glittercake - 11-26-2013, 07:41 AM
RE: Our Last Time - by Mungo man - 11-26-2013, 08:12 AM
RE: Our Last Time - by lostinadventure - 11-28-2013, 06:03 AM
RE: Our Last Time - by Glittercake - 11-28-2013, 08:04 AM
RE: Our Last Time - by rowens - 11-28-2013, 08:17 AM
RE: Our Last Time - by Glittercake - 11-28-2013, 08:33 AM



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