Dusk
#3
Nah wasn't at all going for haiku actually. ;p

I felt like the "a" you proposed in L3 made it a bit too rushed... no?

Thanks for the comments. =]

-justcloudy
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Dusk - by justcloudy - 11-24-2013, 08:06 AM
RE: Dusk - by heslopian - 11-24-2013, 12:22 PM
RE: Dusk - by justcloudy - 11-24-2013, 07:45 PM
RE: Dusk - by gilmored - 12-05-2013, 12:18 PM
RE: Dusk - by Magpie - 12-10-2013, 09:30 PM



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