11-24-2013, 07:10 AM
You have a good voice and the song fits and feels like fresh snow falling, the new guitar has a clear rich tone and the simplicity of the lyric blends nicely with the chord structure (its good to post the chords so others can play) only thought on improvement would be, to have a bridge and chord change between the two verses. Best Keith
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out

