11-24-2013, 06:19 AM
The rules of the Mild Critique forum state that you must only post if "you post at least one considered, suitably detailed comment on someone else's poem in this or another critique forum before posting a poem of your own". Therefore, I have moved your poem. Since it has been a while since you posted here, you probably ought to refamiliarise yourself with the forum rules / admin
It could be worse