11-23-2013, 04:33 AM
(11-18-2013, 02:53 AM)Jae Mc Donnell Wrote: EditThis appears more of a prayer/poem. Cutting some words might make it more relevant to others rather the reader "listening" to you saying the prayer.
I am unbinding movement
Yet motionless calm
I am the petals of the blossom
And winter’s kiss to spring
I am a carefree child's perception
I see wonder in everything
I am a waking moment of clarity
In a barren dreamless night
I am faith beyond religion
Not an ideal of wrong or right
I am blind to race and creed
And need to make this clear
Your hate will not deter me
Nor will you bind me with your fear
Because I am love
And I Am sent me
Original
I am unbinding movement
Yet motionless calm
I am the petals of the blossom
And winter’s kiss to spring
I am a carefree child's perception
I see wonder in everything
I am a waking moment of clarity
In a barren dreamless night
I am faith beyond religion
Not an ideal of wrong or right
I am blind to race and creed
And need to make this clear
I am not here to discuss this
You will lose
Because I am love
And I am sent me
It will also draw them to the I AM at the conclusion and lead the reader to that point.
I am unbinding movement
Yet motionless calm
I am the blossom’s petals
And Winter’s kiss to Spring
I am a carefree child
seeing wonder in all
I am clarity
On a barren night
I am faith itself
Not an ideal
I am blind to race and creed
Unresponsive to fear
Because I am love
And I Am sent me

