11-21-2013, 12:30 PM
(11-21-2013, 12:09 PM)trueenigma Wrote: Great poem. this line hit me somewhere. i don't know how to explain it. it's such a simple line...
Quote:blueprints drawn for room to grow,..but the effect it has on me is not so simple.
thanks for spotlighting it. I missed the thread.
That line only came to be because the crits here pinpointed the first two lines I tried in that spot as weak. All credit to the Pen.
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