11-20-2013, 11:52 AM
Hi
Fascinating stories. Are they true?
Anyway, the heart of the poem should be in the last part about
you and your father and why you continue to misunderstand each other.
I think somehow that needs to be brought out.
In terms of layout, perhaps split each country into its own stanza, just a thought.
enjoyed your poem.
Scott
Fascinating stories. Are they true?
Anyway, the heart of the poem should be in the last part about
you and your father and why you continue to misunderstand each other.
I think somehow that needs to be brought out.
In terms of layout, perhaps split each country into its own stanza, just a thought.
enjoyed your poem.
Scott