11-18-2013, 02:49 AM
Appreciate the feedback, thanks.
I am going to work on presenting versus describing and will post an edited version. Not sure I get it, but your lines do seem less "flat" and like they are leading on to something else. I'll take a stab at it soon. Appreciate you.
I am going to work on presenting versus describing and will post an edited version. Not sure I get it, but your lines do seem less "flat" and like they are leading on to something else. I'll take a stab at it soon. Appreciate you.

