Marsh Prayer - Third Edit

[York E]

The content of the poem is really great. So no critique there. But I would work on spelling and punctuation. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think all the every sentence that begins a line should be capitalized. You put too much punctuation in some parts like, "We, with heavy, clayed feet hum" and put no punctuation or period in some lines and change that in others.